First thoughts

I have been playing about with some ideas for a new poem and my first thoughts are below. I may change it completely or just tweak it here or there. Sometime in the future the finished version may appear here.

I grew up in a Victorian city
a place of monochrome memories

a place of huge machines and horse drawn carts
a place of smoggy skies

a place of long straight streets
a place of black stone buildings

a place thad modernism killed
a place thats vanished

a place that will fade with my memory
leaving only the modern city


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